Senryu (September 12, 2013)

Senryu (September 12, 2013)

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09-17-2013, 02:31 PM

yeah here in the philippines it centigrade and in the uk it's the other one.

nice little poem.

i wonder if the cut would have been strong with "where's the doctor" or something to seperate both clauses a bit more.
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Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by Volaticus - 09-12-2013, 10:21 AM

RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by ellajam - 09-12-2013, 09:50 PM

RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by Volaticus - 09-13-2013, 05:06 AM

RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by ellajam - 09-13-2013, 05:32 AM

RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by Volaticus - 09-15-2013, 12:21 AM

RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by ChristopherSea - 09-13-2013, 05:36 AM

RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by billy - 09-17-2013, 02:31 PM

RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by Volaticus - 09-18-2013, 06:22 AM

RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by Malu - 09-20-2013, 03:01 AM

RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by Malu - 09-18-2013, 05:33 AM

RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by bena - 09-19-2013, 10:07 AM

RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by billy - 09-19-2013, 10:11 AM

RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by Volaticus - 09-19-2013, 10:13 AM

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