09-15-2013, 11:29 AM
Thanks for your comments, billy, and good suggestions for the opening lines. I've never titled poems until posting them on this site, so never really thought of them as an intro. Something to chew on.
Tis will die its noble death next edit, guess a private joke with myself has no place here.
Plenty to work on. Again, thanks
Tis will die its noble death next edit, guess a private joke with myself has no place here.
Plenty to work on. Again, thanks
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