Interpretation...is it valid critique?

[milo]

Actually I remember Pinky saying something about a Sanders poem along those lines, in an essay; Lethe is whatever time sprinkles on everything, it's so perfect that you don't even need to know what Lethe means, but I think Sanders was combining a similar word from Latin with the well known Greek here....him being notable scholar and poet in Latin...

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Of course most professional crits involve phrases like, "this seems to imply...etc...", but with internet poets it can be as simple as saying " this missing comma makes me wonder if nuzzle jazz is meant to modify the statue..."

I don't think anyone is providing or expecting professional crit on this site. You are reminding me that I still like that line. Perhaps I should keep it after all or at least build a different poem around it.