Magnetic Beasts (Edit 2)

Magnetic Beasts (Edit 2)

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09-15-2013, 12:35 AM

Hi leftover sushi,
I like your idea of contrasting the creepy imagery. I think it could have a strong effect in this poem, if used just the right way. Thanks a lot for your input, I'll think about ways to utilize it properly and hopefully come up with something.

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Magnetic Beasts (Edit 2) - by Volaticus - 09-04-2013, 09:18 AM

RE: Magnetic Beasts - by Owlster Bierce - 09-04-2013, 09:52 AM

RE: Magnetic Beasts - by Volaticus - 09-05-2013, 06:08 AM

RE: Magnetic Beasts - by milo - 09-05-2013, 06:14 AM

RE: Magnetic Beasts - by Volaticus - 09-05-2013, 06:18 AM

RE: Magnetic Beasts - by milo - 09-05-2013, 06:44 AM

RE: Magnetic Beasts - by tectak - 09-05-2013, 05:55 PM

RE: Magnetic Beasts - by Volaticus - 09-05-2013, 07:04 AM

RE: Magnetic Beasts - by Owlster Bierce - 09-05-2013, 07:43 AM

RE: Magnetic Beasts (Edit 1) - by Volaticus - 09-07-2013, 08:00 AM