09-14-2013, 09:17 AM
Hi there;
the only suggestion I have would be to leave that descriptive "round" off. Nature gave chicken eggs an oval shape, more pointed at one end. A perfectly round egg would not easily pass from the uterus into and through the vent. However, you may be referring to the human female's egg, in which case my comment is inaccurate. Neat little poem. Jerry
the only suggestion I have would be to leave that descriptive "round" off. Nature gave chicken eggs an oval shape, more pointed at one end. A perfectly round egg would not easily pass from the uterus into and through the vent. However, you may be referring to the human female's egg, in which case my comment is inaccurate. Neat little poem. Jerry