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Here we go,
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09-14-2013, 04:35 AM
I enjoyed all of the fire and spit in this poem. You have a lot of images and quick metaphors. The tiger was my favorite one. Since you are already doing it, I would make that 'is nice' in your opener. Do you mean 'until it makes the ultimate mistake' in your closer. Keep writing in this style!
My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris
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Here we go, - by Malu - 09-14-2013, 04:00 AM
RE: Here we go, yes this is a simple poem about being in this poetry for fun forum - by tectak - 09-14-2013, 04:22 AM
RE: Here we go, yes this is a simple poem about being in this poetry for fun forum - by Malu - 09-14-2013, 04:35 AM
RE: Here we go, yes this is a simple poem about being in this poetry for fun forum - by ChristopherSea - 09-14-2013, 04:35 AM
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