09-13-2013, 10:52 PM
these comments are pretty funny. wish there was a forum here where i could see more arguments and people being banned, it's very entertaining.
please forgive any errors, i'm typing impatiently with one hand (my wife is sleeping on the other arm).
anyways, i sort of agree that the begining is the weakest part of the poem, but not so weak that it matters, (it's not like i was at all tempted to stop reading). i think this poem will be easily related to by other writers especially. the ending imagery was the strongest point for me. also, i like how it makes me think of suffering for the sake of art (as if art is something important).
please forgive any errors, i'm typing impatiently with one hand (my wife is sleeping on the other arm).
anyways, i sort of agree that the begining is the weakest part of the poem, but not so weak that it matters, (it's not like i was at all tempted to stop reading). i think this poem will be easily related to by other writers especially. the ending imagery was the strongest point for me. also, i like how it makes me think of suffering for the sake of art (as if art is something important).