09-13-2013, 02:28 PM
Without correct punctuation, at least a period, it is difficult for me to make much of this. Mainly it reads as a run on sentence. Certainly there are those poems that try and share a subject between two sections, in this case "pieces of Night time fog", but generally they fail because they only create confusion. Such is the case here.
Dale
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.