Magnetic Beasts (Edit 2)

Magnetic Beasts (Edit 2)

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09-13-2013, 02:27 PM

I thought the imagery was strong. i would have left me feeling a little queasy if i was the sqeamish type. maybe adding something to contrast the creepy imagery would be good. something philosophical and hopeful could work if you put it in there and then immediately extinguish it with more depressing/disgusting stuff.

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Magnetic Beasts (Edit 2) - by Volaticus - 09-04-2013, 09:18 AM

RE: Magnetic Beasts - by Owlster Bierce - 09-04-2013, 09:52 AM

RE: Magnetic Beasts - by Volaticus - 09-05-2013, 06:08 AM

RE: Magnetic Beasts - by milo - 09-05-2013, 06:14 AM

RE: Magnetic Beasts - by Volaticus - 09-05-2013, 06:18 AM

RE: Magnetic Beasts - by milo - 09-05-2013, 06:44 AM

RE: Magnetic Beasts - by tectak - 09-05-2013, 05:55 PM

RE: Magnetic Beasts - by Volaticus - 09-05-2013, 07:04 AM

RE: Magnetic Beasts - by Owlster Bierce - 09-05-2013, 07:43 AM

RE: Magnetic Beasts (Edit 1) - by Volaticus - 09-07-2013, 08:00 AM