Things I Sometimes Forget (2nd draft)
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I liked it to begin with, before I knew it was based on something. I still like your first particular version of things based on something, but damn it, I wish you had come up with all of it. What other changes did you make other than the Dominoes thing and the 2013 thing?

Unfortunately, this poem will never work, because that anonymous asshole already did it. But that's okay; just do something else.
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RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by rowens - 09-07-2013, 10:57 PM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by fim - 09-08-2013, 02:08 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by milo - 09-08-2013, 02:10 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by rowens - 09-08-2013, 02:30 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by milo - 09-08-2013, 02:43 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by rowens - 09-08-2013, 02:49 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by Obloquy - 09-08-2013, 04:13 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by billy - 09-08-2013, 11:51 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by leftover sushi - 09-08-2013, 04:06 PM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by Reilley - 09-09-2013, 09:06 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget (2nd draft) - by rowens - 09-13-2013, 08:51 AM



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