09-13-2013, 06:40 AM
Thanks, Cidermaid;
and there I thought this poem would earmark me for hell because I treated the biblical creation chapter in such a lighthearted manner. "The Meaning of Life" is one of my favorite Monty Python movies--along with Life of Brian. I have noted your "clayish" versus 'lumpy' comment, and since you are the second poet to have commented on my word choice, I agree: "lumpy" works better. Thanks for that, and I welcome any other suggestion. Glad you visited,
Jerry
and there I thought this poem would earmark me for hell because I treated the biblical creation chapter in such a lighthearted manner. "The Meaning of Life" is one of my favorite Monty Python movies--along with Life of Brian. I have noted your "clayish" versus 'lumpy' comment, and since you are the second poet to have commented on my word choice, I agree: "lumpy" works better. Thanks for that, and I welcome any other suggestion. Glad you visited,
Jerry

