His Masterpiece (A Comedy of Creation) SENSITIVE
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Thanks, Cidermaid;
and there I thought this poem would earmark me for hell because I treated the biblical creation chapter in such a lighthearted manner. "The Meaning of Life" is one of my favorite Monty Python movies--along with Life of Brian. I have noted your "clayish" versus 'lumpy' comment, and since you are the second poet to have commented on my word choice, I agree: "lumpy" works better. Thanks for that, and I welcome any other suggestion. Glad you visited,
Jerry
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RE: His Masterpiece (A Comedy of Creation) SENSITIVE - by Snowbells - 09-13-2013, 06:40 AM



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