Senryu (September 12, 2013)
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(09-13-2013, 05:06 AM)Volaticus Wrote:  
(09-12-2013, 09:50 PM)ellajam Wrote:  approaching
sixty ~ laughing
my ass off
I like your take on it, made me smile Smile The poem is about being sick and having high fever though.
Sorry I didn't get it, I come from Fahrenheit land. Here we would have said:
exceeding
one hundred
(call the undertaker)

hope you're feeling better.

It's been a while since I posted on an international forum. I love those mix-ups. Smile
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Messages In This Thread
Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by Volaticus - 09-12-2013, 10:21 AM
RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by ellajam - 09-12-2013, 09:50 PM
RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by Volaticus - 09-13-2013, 05:06 AM
RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by ellajam - 09-13-2013, 05:32 AM
RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by Volaticus - 09-15-2013, 12:21 AM
RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by billy - 09-17-2013, 02:31 PM
RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by Volaticus - 09-18-2013, 06:22 AM
RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by Malu - 09-20-2013, 03:01 AM
RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by Malu - 09-18-2013, 05:33 AM
RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by bena - 09-19-2013, 10:07 AM
RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by billy - 09-19-2013, 10:11 AM
RE: Senryu (September 12, 2013) - by Volaticus - 09-19-2013, 10:13 AM



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