Inanibility

Inanibility

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09-13-2013, 04:00 AM

Well, you do have an ellipsis there indicating omission and there's nothing wrong with a stream of consciousness...

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Lone laboratory rat
in cold steel cage,
treads a wheel
roaming nowhere-
lost in the maze.

My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

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Inanibility - by rowens - 09-03-2013, 11:54 PM

RE: Inanibility - by Erthona - 09-04-2013, 12:28 AM

RE: Inanibility - by rowens - 09-04-2013, 12:33 AM

RE: Inanibility - by ChristopherSea - 09-12-2013, 11:49 PM

RE: Inanibility - by rowens - 09-13-2013, 12:56 AM

RE: Inanibility - by ChristopherSea - 09-13-2013, 04:00 AM

RE: Inanibility - by ChristopherSea - 09-13-2013, 05:14 AM

RE: Inanibility - by rowens - 09-13-2013, 04:23 AM

RE: Inanibility - by ChristopherSea - 09-13-2013, 04:46 AM

RE: Inanibility - by rowens - 09-13-2013, 05:02 AM

RE: Inanibility - by rowens - 09-13-2013, 05:34 AM

RE: Inanibility - by rowens - 09-13-2013, 08:15 AM

RE: Inanibility - by ChristopherSea - 09-13-2013, 11:19 AM

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