09-12-2013, 11:06 PM
Thanks to all who posted here, it is a great lesson in poetry, critiquing and editing. Leaving it up for less experienced writers like myself is a great gift. The difference between versions is striking. So well done.
billy wrote:welcome to the site. make it your own, wear it like a well loved slipper and wear it out. ella pleads:please click forum titles for posting guidelines, important threads. New poet? Try Poetic DevicesandWard's Tips

