Rain
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(09-09-2013, 05:52 PM)expiring_touch Wrote:  Oh not to lose these pieces of
Night time fog spilled suddenly
Over the finite sky, backlit, I could
Almost reach out and touch it-
unfold across my palm
Your eye in reverse,
Consumed by its own
black crystal.
The imagery is nice, I'm slightly confused as to what your eye in reverse exactly means? Or should I say, what you are trying to get across with that.
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Rain - by expiring_touch - 09-09-2013, 05:52 PM
RE: Rain - by spookyfoot - 09-11-2013, 08:42 AM
RE: Rain - by Malu - 09-12-2013, 07:22 AM
RE: Rain - by Spikerider - 09-12-2013, 08:07 AM
RE: Rain - by bebaird - 09-13-2013, 11:36 AM
RE: Rain - by Erthona - 09-13-2013, 02:28 PM
RE: Rain - by Savanna - 09-14-2013, 08:56 AM



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