A Baptist Observes Mardi Gras

A Baptist Observes Mardi Gras

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09-11-2013, 11:06 PM

I'll try to get back later for a more thorough comment on the new revision, but after considering Tom's comment on stanza/strophe breaks: I agree.

I don't think there is a reason to break it into strophes.

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A Baptist Observes Mardi Gras - by ChristopherSea - 09-09-2013, 08:46 PM

RE: Carnival - by Todd - 09-09-2013, 10:18 PM

RE: Carnival - by ChristopherSea - 09-09-2013, 10:28 PM

RE: Carnival - by Todd - 09-11-2013, 06:42 AM

RE: Carnival - by ChristopherSea - 09-11-2013, 06:54 PM

RE: Carnival - by tectak - 09-11-2013, 06:50 AM

RE: Carnival - by Todd - 09-11-2013, 06:58 AM

RE: Carnival - by ChristopherSea - 09-11-2013, 07:31 AM

RE: Carnival - by tectak - 09-11-2013, 08:56 PM

RE: Carnival - by ChristopherSea - 09-11-2013, 09:42 PM

RE: Carnival - by tectak - 09-11-2013, 10:06 PM

RE: Carnival - by ChristopherSea - 09-11-2013, 11:43 PM

RE: Carnival - by Todd - 09-11-2013, 11:06 PM

RE: Carnival - by rowens - 09-12-2013, 01:49 AM

RE: Carnival - by ChristopherSea - 09-12-2013, 02:18 AM

RE: Carnival - by rowens - 09-12-2013, 02:26 AM

RE: Carnival - by ChristopherSea - 09-12-2013, 04:14 AM

RE: Carnival - by tectak - 09-12-2013, 07:55 AM

RE: Carnival - by ChristopherSea - 09-12-2013, 08:44 AM

RE: Carnival - by ChristopherSea - 09-12-2013, 11:48 AM

RE: Carnival - by tectak - 09-12-2013, 03:36 PM

RE: Carnival - by trueenigma - 09-12-2013, 11:53 AM

RE: Carnival - by ChristopherSea - 09-12-2013, 07:06 PM

RE: A Baptist Observes Mardi Gras - by ellajam - 09-12-2013, 11:06 PM

RE: A Baptist Observes Mardi Gras - by Todd - 09-12-2013, 11:35 PM

RE: A Baptist Observes Mardi Gras - by ChristopherSea - 09-12-2013, 11:50 PM

RE: A Baptist Observes Mardi Gras - by rowens - 09-13-2013, 12:21 AM

RE: A Baptist Observes Mardi Gras - by trueenigma - 09-13-2013, 02:30 AM

RE: A Baptist Observes Mardi Gras - by ChristopherSea - 09-13-2013, 03:06 AM

RE: A Baptist Observes Mardi Gras - by trueenigma - 09-13-2013, 06:41 AM

RE: A Baptist Observes Mardi Gras - by ChristopherSea - 09-13-2013, 07:47 AM

RE: A Baptist Observes Mardi Gras - by trueenigma - 09-13-2013, 08:37 AM

RE: A Baptist Observes Mardi Gras - by ChristopherSea - 09-13-2013, 11:12 AM

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