09-11-2013, 07:52 AM
(09-05-2013, 02:33 PM)secretkeeper Wrote: Do not wish to Sleep do IIt's all a bit cliché with cries and eyes and sighs and such.
Though nothing very urgent cries
And Heavy has long been my eyes
This silence oft broken by sighs
I do will to walk outside... yet,
No will is summoned to take stride
Instead I sit with time to bide
And wait for the world to rise
Why are you waiting for the world to rise?
It's hard to critique and sumerise,
'oft' is not a modern word
have you honestly not heard?
Biding time is commonplace,
I think you should take this up a pace.

