09-11-2013, 06:58 AM
One other thing I forgot to mention:
Constructions like "cautiously closed"
There has got to be a better verb or some better action that can replace these adverb/verbs.
When I read these I always think there's a word out there that we haven't found yet.
Okay, I'll shut up now.
Constructions like "cautiously closed"
There has got to be a better verb or some better action that can replace these adverb/verbs.
When I read these I always think there's a word out there that we haven't found yet.
Okay, I'll shut up now.
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson