09-10-2013, 04:14 PM
SK I have moved your original thread into this board as this was your request. / Mod.
If i could make a suggestion: you have already recieved some good pointers for editing purposes and that perhaps if you are serious about improving your poem, offer your readers an edit (on the top of this page above your original so that people can see what changes have been made). People are generally intersted in a poem once they have commented and will look back in over any edits, but nobody wants to keep re-reading something they have already commented on. AJ.
If i could make a suggestion: you have already recieved some good pointers for editing purposes and that perhaps if you are serious about improving your poem, offer your readers an edit (on the top of this page above your original so that people can see what changes have been made). People are generally intersted in a poem once they have commented and will look back in over any edits, but nobody wants to keep re-reading something they have already commented on. AJ.