09-10-2013, 08:27 AM
The last line has an ironic sense to it that I like. The rest just doesn't do enough to draw me in or distinguish itself. It's just a little too general to take seriously. Stop for a second and consider love ALL things. Would the result really be that kindness will spread--Maybe title it: "In the Land of Bumper Stickers" and you could get away with something like this.
You'd have to go more over the top to pull it off though.
Just thoughts,
Todd
You'd have to go more over the top to pull it off though.
Just thoughts,
Todd
The secret of poetry is cruelty.--Jon Anderson
