09-10-2013, 03:54 AM
Composers doesn't need an apostrophe; dewy doesn't need an extra e.
Sounds have paled as centuries allow is a hard line; but I don't know if you know that. If you do, I think it's fine.
In that spirit, I like how you describe discordant things through the end of the poem. How they can be absorbed and incorporated into traditional music. How they can make a new music.
Sounds have paled as centuries allow is a hard line; but I don't know if you know that. If you do, I think it's fine.
In that spirit, I like how you describe discordant things through the end of the poem. How they can be absorbed and incorporated into traditional music. How they can make a new music.