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09-09-2013, 08:38 PM

Eileen, Nice edit! Although you removed the elegy line, I am glad that you still sing one, maintaining that eerie/angry dirge that is so effective. Maybe 'of red on white' instead of 'of white and red' would solve any ambiquity concerning the contrast of his final lines on chalky bluffs./Chris

My new watercolor: 'Nightmare After Christmas'/Chris

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Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by EileenGreay - 09-05-2013, 04:39 AM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head - by milo - 09-05-2013, 05:23 AM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head - by tectak - 09-05-2013, 06:13 PM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head - by Erthona - 09-06-2013, 07:43 AM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head - by EileenGreay - 09-06-2013, 07:44 AM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head - by billy - 09-06-2013, 09:01 AM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head - by ChristopherSea - 09-08-2013, 11:49 AM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head - by btrudo - 09-08-2013, 03:20 PM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by btrudo - 09-09-2013, 07:56 AM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by EileenGreay - 09-09-2013, 07:20 PM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by btrudo - 09-09-2013, 08:52 PM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by EileenGreay - 09-09-2013, 11:20 PM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by btrudo - 09-09-2013, 11:49 PM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by EileenGreay - 09-10-2013, 01:09 AM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by trueenigma - 09-09-2013, 10:08 AM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by billy - 09-09-2013, 10:24 AM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by ChristopherSea - 09-09-2013, 08:38 PM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by ChristopherSea - 09-09-2013, 08:57 PM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by Todd - 09-09-2013, 09:41 PM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by btrudo - 09-10-2013, 01:31 AM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by EileenGreay - 09-10-2013, 01:45 AM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by tectak - 09-10-2013, 04:39 AM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by Leanne - 09-10-2013, 05:17 AM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by EileenGreay - 09-10-2013, 06:15 AM

RE: Judas Iscariot at Beachy Head [edit 1] - by btrudo - 09-10-2013, 06:16 AM

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