Sleepless

Sleepless

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09-09-2013, 10:44 AM

You messed up on the rhyme scheme in the second stanza

A
B
B
B

C
D
D
E

"In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite." - Paul Dirac (1902 - 1984)

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Sleepless - by secretkeeper - 09-05-2013, 02:33 PM

RE: Sleepless - by cidermaid - 09-05-2013, 05:36 PM

RE: Sleepless - by leftover sushi - 09-07-2013, 10:47 PM

RE: Sleepless - by Malu - 09-09-2013, 07:30 AM

RE: Sleepless - by Volaticus - 09-09-2013, 09:02 AM

RE: Sleepless - by Reilley - 09-09-2013, 10:44 AM

RE: Sleepless - by shenaz - 09-09-2013, 07:17 PM

RE: Sleepless - by alatos - 09-09-2013, 09:27 PM

RE: Sleepless - by cidermaid - 09-10-2013, 04:14 PM

RE: Sleepless - by blueforest10 - 09-11-2013, 12:50 AM

RE: Sleepless - by ScurryFunger - 09-11-2013, 07:52 AM

RE: Sleepless - by Smo927 - 09-11-2013, 12:38 PM

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