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A Plane Crashes Into Mother
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09-09-2013, 10:06 AM
Thanks for reading, Rowens. A comma should probably go after "plumber." Maybe after "hand" in the strope above that one, too.
Thanks, Billy. This is fiction. I was inspired to write it after viewing Salvador Dali paintings online for an hour or so. I'll change to 'neighbor will.' |
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A Plane Crashes Into Mother - by Owlster Bierce - 09-09-2013, 09:40 AM
RE: A Plane Crashes Into Mother - by rowens - 09-09-2013, 09:57 AM
RE: A Plane Crashes Into Mother - by billy - 09-09-2013, 10:06 AM
RE: A Plane Crashes Into Mother - by Owlster Bierce - 09-09-2013, 10:06 AM
RE: A Plane Crashes Into Mother - by billy - 09-09-2013, 11:31 AM
RE: A Plane Crashes Into Mother - by Owlster Bierce - 09-09-2013, 11:42 AM
RE: A Plane Crashes Into Mother - by rowens - 09-10-2013, 12:23 AM
RE: A Plane Crashes Into Mother - by Nick - 09-10-2013, 02:50 AM
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