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Things I Sometimes Forget (2nd draft)
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09-09-2013, 09:06 AM
I agree with Billy that the phrase "because that was what it was about" is redundant, we can see he was a black and white, unembroidered kind of guy, which makes the end that much more direct.
"In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite." - Paul Dirac (1902 - 1984) |
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Things I Sometimes Forget (2nd draft) - by leftover sushi - 09-07-2013, 10:53 PM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by rowens - 09-07-2013, 10:57 PM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by fim - 09-08-2013, 02:08 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by milo - 09-08-2013, 02:10 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by rowens - 09-08-2013, 02:30 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by milo - 09-08-2013, 02:43 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by rowens - 09-08-2013, 02:49 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by Obloquy - 09-08-2013, 04:13 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by billy - 09-08-2013, 11:51 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by leftover sushi - 09-08-2013, 04:06 PM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget - by Reilley - 09-09-2013, 09:06 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget (2nd draft) - by leftover sushi - 09-12-2013, 11:05 PM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget (2nd draft) - by cidermaid - 09-13-2013, 03:40 AM
RE: Things I Sometimes Forget (2nd draft) - by rowens - 09-13-2013, 08:51 AM
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