Floating Toward the Light
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Thanks, Milo;
I appreciate your suggestions. You may have saved this meant-to-be humorous write from the chopping block. One reason for all those line breaks might be that I tried to suggest hesitation due to the administered pre-anesthetics that had my mind take weird terms. Needless to say, I'm not happy with this write, but I'll play with it till I get it right. Thanks again. Jerry
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Floating Toward the Light - by Snowbells - 09-08-2013, 10:03 AM
RE: Floating Toward the Light - by rowens - 09-09-2013, 02:28 AM
RE: Floating Toward the Light - by Snowbells - 09-09-2013, 02:52 AM
RE: Floating Toward the Light - by milo - 09-09-2013, 03:15 AM
RE: Floating Toward the Light - by Snowbells - 09-09-2013, 03:42 AM
RE: Floating Toward the Light - by ellajam - 09-11-2013, 11:04 AM



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