09-09-2013, 03:42 AM
Thanks, Milo;
I appreciate your suggestions. You may have saved this meant-to-be humorous write from the chopping block. One reason for all those line breaks might be that I tried to suggest hesitation due to the administered pre-anesthetics that had my mind take weird terms. Needless to say, I'm not happy with this write, but I'll play with it till I get it right. Thanks again. Jerry
I appreciate your suggestions. You may have saved this meant-to-be humorous write from the chopping block. One reason for all those line breaks might be that I tried to suggest hesitation due to the administered pre-anesthetics that had my mind take weird terms. Needless to say, I'm not happy with this write, but I'll play with it till I get it right. Thanks again. Jerry

