Curiosity
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Hi, Wjames;
I like this vignette that focuses on a child's fascination with marching ants at its feet. Please see my notes below. Jerry

(09-07-2013, 01:08 AM)Wjames Wrote:  Magnifying glass in hand,
the child basks in the black heat
of his driveways asphalt, enamoured (I would suggest, "intrigued" or "fascinated.")
by the instinctual sophistication of the ant [colony] at his feet. (Maybe ant swarm, because the actual ant colony would stay underground. I visualize a swarm of ants on a foraging expedition.)
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Curiosity - by Wjames - 09-07-2013, 01:08 AM
RE: Curiosity - by rowens - 09-09-2013, 02:17 AM
RE: Curiosity - by Snowbells - 09-09-2013, 03:10 AM
RE: Curiosity - by Bunx - 09-09-2013, 07:39 AM
RE: Curiosity - by Wjames - 09-09-2013, 09:34 AM
RE: Curiosity - by Wjames - 09-16-2014, 05:33 AM
RE: Curiosity - by justcloudy - 09-17-2014, 04:52 AM
RE: Curiosity - by Wjames - 09-17-2014, 05:14 AM
RE: Curiosity - by justcloudy - 09-17-2014, 05:33 AM
RE: Curiosity - by Wjames - 09-17-2014, 05:40 AM



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