09-09-2013, 03:10 AM
Hi, Wjames;
I like this vignette that focuses on a child's fascination with marching ants at its feet. Please see my notes below. Jerry
I like this vignette that focuses on a child's fascination with marching ants at its feet. Please see my notes below. Jerry
(09-07-2013, 01:08 AM)Wjames Wrote: Magnifying glass in hand,
the child basks in the black heat
of his driveways asphalt, enamoured (I would suggest, "intrigued" or "fascinated.")
by the instinctual sophistication of the ant [colony] at his feet. (Maybe ant swarm, because the actual ant colony would stay underground. I visualize a swarm of ants on a foraging expedition.)

