09-08-2013, 04:17 PM
Remember, corners, sweatshirt seem like decent end word choices.
Though I do think the shortened version doesn't do much good here. A good ole' fashioned sestina, all 39 lines, would do this more justice.
Sestinas are difficult to write well, but I think the literal and psychological territory of being homeless would be accessible in the form.
a thought or two,
Bill
Though I do think the shortened version doesn't do much good here. A good ole' fashioned sestina, all 39 lines, would do this more justice.
Sestinas are difficult to write well, but I think the literal and psychological territory of being homeless would be accessible in the form.
a thought or two,
Bill