The Ride

[savino76]

I wish it was more of a narrative. All the things that happened, all those daunting, challenging, lonesome, and ultimately illuminating moments, aren't here. I would think they need to be here.

a thought,
Bill

Thanks for your thoughts. What do you think of this expansion in bold? Still too vague?

...there were still miles to go. Miles of unknown land, miles of indefinite adventure. The time spent in solitude was daunting, and the pain in my heels was almost unbearable. But the true measure of a man’s spirit...