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09-08-2013, 12:28 AM

(09-08-2013, 12:22 AM)Spikerider Wrote: I agree i do poorly with that, i tried in vein. I will tweek & repost in a few days the cliches were intended.

Cliches are poem killers. Poems need to be composed in fresh, original language.

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DEFEATED - by Spikerider - 09-07-2013, 09:36 AM

RE: DEFEATED - by heslopian - 09-07-2013, 12:39 PM

RE: DEFEATED - by tectak - 09-07-2013, 03:50 PM

RE: DEFEATED - by Spikerider - 09-08-2013, 12:22 AM

RE: DEFEATED - by milo - 09-08-2013, 12:28 AM

RE: DEFEATED - by tectak - 09-09-2013, 07:31 AM

RE: DEFEATED - by billy - 09-08-2013, 04:15 PM

RE: DEFEATED - by ChristopherSea - 09-08-2013, 09:41 PM

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