09-07-2013, 10:57 PM
So far, this is looking good. I'll try to pull my head out of the Oldies section and say something more in a few minutes. I'll read it a few more times, too.
It just seems to work. For me, it does what it sets out to do. It goes right to the point, and stays there till the end. I like poems like this. But that's me. I know people like that, and I can see him without you having to describe what he looks like. I like when poems just open up and start talking.
It just seems to work. For me, it does what it sets out to do. It goes right to the point, and stays there till the end. I like poems like this. But that's me. I know people like that, and I can see him without you having to describe what he looks like. I like when poems just open up and start talking.