Lying down.edit0.00001 erthona
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(09-06-2013, 06:12 AM)Owlster Bierce Wrote:  Enjoyed the read. As Dale mentioned it is a tad Hallmarkish in spots, but not too blatantly, IMO. I love this:

"Memories hold no umbrellas but shaded
under blackened branch we stained our love on wet and silver bark."

"Soon moons" sounds to me like a Korean name.

Dan
I feel the same about yu-hoo-glue!
Thanks,
tectak
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Lying down.edit0.00001 erthona - by tectak - 09-05-2013, 04:18 PM
RE: Lying down - by Erthona - 09-06-2013, 12:10 AM
RE: Lying down - by tectak - 09-06-2013, 05:32 AM
RE: Lying down - by Owlster Bierce - 09-06-2013, 06:12 AM
RE: Lying down.edit0.00001 erthona - by tectak - 09-07-2013, 06:40 AM
RE: Lying down - by Erthona - 09-06-2013, 07:05 AM



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