09-07-2013, 06:24 AM
the last six lines really spoke to me as an unemployed smoker. i've read some of your work, and a few of your critiques here on the site. i have no critique for you personally. i enjoy your poetry.
Though happy that you have quit smoking, your employment status should give you enough time for considered crit...which this is not. Please give the author the benefit of your thinking on the poem presented. It is not enough to say "it spoke to me".
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Though happy that you have quit smoking, your employment status should give you enough time for considered crit...which this is not. Please give the author the benefit of your thinking on the poem presented. It is not enough to say "it spoke to me".
mod