A Mockery of a Child's Acrostic

A Mockery of a Child's Acrostic

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09-06-2013, 07:12 PM

I think the imagery is very nice. A bit like paloma faith, but I don't really get the point of the poem. Too many ideas scattered around. I feel that you need to take one idea and develop your poem around it to make it coherent. Jmho

Bi aori adan fi sebo, ao lo obe

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A Mockery of a Child's Acrostic - by OliverPorano - 09-04-2013, 04:57 AM

RE: A Mockery of a Child's Acrostic - by rowens - 09-05-2013, 02:07 AM

RE: A Mockery of a Child's Acrostic - by LittleOwl - 09-05-2013, 05:32 AM

RE: A Mockery of a Child's Acrostic - by betalife - 09-05-2013, 06:01 AM

RE: A Mockery of a Child's Acrostic - by OliverPorano - 09-05-2013, 06:19 AM

RE: A Mockery of a Child's Acrostic - by Elsie Fillmore - 09-06-2013, 09:57 AM

RE: A Mockery of a Child's Acrostic - by shenaz - 09-06-2013, 07:12 PM

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