09-06-2013, 06:12 AM
Enjoyed the read. As Dale mentioned it is a tad Hallmarkish in spots, but not too blatantly, IMO. I love this:
"Memories hold no umbrellas but shaded
under blackened branch we stained our love on wet and silver bark."
"Soon moons" sounds to me like a Korean name.
Dan
"Memories hold no umbrellas but shaded
under blackened branch we stained our love on wet and silver bark."
"Soon moons" sounds to me like a Korean name.
Dan