Postdemonic Condition

[cidermaid]

I like this very much. It reads like a a loving caress and a slap across the face all in one.
I think you have really captured something powerful here.
But I would like to see some puctuation and I'm not sure that the last line reads quite as smooth as it could.
Suggestion: But a saviour doesn't write poetry
(also ? spelling on saviour...or is this an American thing)

Thanks for the read i will be back to read again - greatly appreciated this one AJ.