She was the one?
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You seem like a good egg to take Milo's feedback in such good heart (esp given this was your first day)...
but... Please remember to read the site rules and leave feedback on other poems before you posting more of your own in the crit boards. / mod.
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She was the one? - by Freestylekilla - 09-05-2013, 11:11 PM
RE: She was the one? - by milo - 09-05-2013, 11:23 PM
RE: She was the one? - by Freestylekilla - 09-05-2013, 11:30 PM
RE: She was the one? - by cidermaid - 09-06-2013, 01:42 AM



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