09-05-2013, 11:30 PM
(09-05-2013, 11:23 PM)milo Wrote: One of the worst things I have read in a long while. Endless piles of tired phrasings and cliches without a single original thought or image. This is "anti-poetry", everything that poetry isn't is captured here. Horrible rhymes? Check! Messed up meter. Check! Bad spelling grammar and punctuation? Check! Pointlessly mawkish and trite? Check! Really quite painful, but I say all this in miscellaneous so enjoy!You are right I wrote this for someone kind of fast and its not even close to being where it could be. I will edit it later. Thank you