09-05-2013, 09:24 PM
Hi there;
I wondered about your comma placement as well, but now I realize that it has everything to do with style. In a way, it reminds me of E. E. Cummings' writings that often lacked capital letters, proper punctuation and proper grammar. Since you seem to make use of the odd comma placement in each of your posts, I'm convinced that it's done for style. I do like the message you conveyed in this poem. Take care. J.
I wondered about your comma placement as well, but now I realize that it has everything to do with style. In a way, it reminds me of E. E. Cummings' writings that often lacked capital letters, proper punctuation and proper grammar. Since you seem to make use of the odd comma placement in each of your posts, I'm convinced that it's done for style. I do like the message you conveyed in this poem. Take care. J.