When Pyrocumulus Last In the Western Lands Bloomed

[Owlster Bierce]

Hi Owlster, there is little to add that hasn't been pointed out. Initially I felt this should be in the fun board, cause it is fun. I agree the
"cree,cree,cree" is not so good to the point of being annoying. The very volume of this put me off as I have the attention span of a gnat these days, but I stayed with it and found it to be quite entertaining and amusing. You are letting it rest so that is good, see you in a month.
Best!
Heart

Thanks, Heart. I take "entertaining and amusing" as a compliment, and actually consider the poem a success because you see it that way. I think if more poems were written with the reading public in mind instead of other poets more people would read poetry.