09-05-2013, 06:19 AM
Thank you, thank you everyone. This is ten times better than all the crap I was getting on Poetry.com like:
"4 stars good"
"2 stars mercy, you are killing me"
"ok"
I wrote this poem while in my geometry class, having forgotten several assignments and having to write an acrostic poem about myself. Next time, I will try and give more thought to my poetry as I write it. My mind tends to wander when I write poetry, and each of those lines actually does have meaning to me, but I'll have to be more coherent.
"4 stars good"
"2 stars mercy, you are killing me"
"ok"
I wrote this poem while in my geometry class, having forgotten several assignments and having to write an acrostic poem about myself. Next time, I will try and give more thought to my poetry as I write it. My mind tends to wander when I write poetry, and each of those lines actually does have meaning to me, but I'll have to be more coherent.