09-04-2013, 07:05 AM
Hi Leanne
I like the voice in this, a bystander at the grave side allowing us to listen in on the comment then giving us commentary, the Rhymes are very subtle and I also enjoyed the irony of the platitudes not sure if you meant it but I read the last line as a summation of our poets life. Thanks Keith
I like the voice in this, a bystander at the grave side allowing us to listen in on the comment then giving us commentary, the Rhymes are very subtle and I also enjoyed the irony of the platitudes not sure if you meant it but I read the last line as a summation of our poets life. Thanks Keith
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