09-04-2013, 06:38 AM
I think this is absolutely beautiful. Poetry is subjective just like any art form, but this one is particularly beautiful to me. Its feels dark and dramatic and melancholic... yet peaceful and honest. I feel like sometimes people use elaborate details and an overly complicated vocabulary to seem "smart" or established, but in doing so it loses its honesty and humanity. Yours is just as dramatic yet still so real. Beautiful.
