As The Floor Disappears

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While there are some good lines, like "Wading through a lack of time," I think this poem is too abstract. The first six lines could serve as a good beginning but it suddenly ends without any real satisfaction for the reader. I like how the floor disappears when the speaker "sees" stress surround him, suggesting impotence and L1 could also suggest that the speaker is creating these obstacles for himself. But I think there ultimately needs more to grab onto. Hopefully I'm not being too vague. I think this poem has good potential.