Latency (edit 1)
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This is something I've been playing with...a little change and now showing lines:

Latency (edit 1)

Thunder declares the calm as a crown
and wears it proudly; the world has welled
the skies, the clouds. They strike the street,
the leaves and the grass, a green which gathers,
groomed for the rain. The ground is a gate
open today, this date, this deed,
where heavens heave their hefty stores
and a Whitman whiles, writing of blood.



Latency

Thunder declares the calm as a crown and wears it proudly when the world has welled its skies, the clouds. They strike the street, the leaves and the grass, the green which gathers, groomed for rain. The ground is a gate open today, this date, this deed, where heavens heave their hefty stores and a Whitman whiles, writing of blood.
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Latency (edit 1) - by btrudo - 09-02-2013, 02:31 AM
RE: Latency - by whatispoetry? - 09-02-2013, 12:17 PM
RE: Latency (edit 1) - by btrudo - 09-03-2013, 02:35 AM
RE: Latency - by expiring_touch - 09-02-2013, 01:46 PM
RE: Latency - by allykat727 - 09-03-2013, 12:21 AM
RE: Latency (edit 1) - by in-need-of-an-empire - 09-05-2013, 07:18 AM
RE: Latency (edit 1) - by btrudo - 09-06-2013, 08:33 AM



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