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"First Dawn Glances"

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09-01-2013, 09:28 AM

Thanks V! I will work on what you noted.

(09-01-2013, 09:28 AM)C.M.C. Wrote: Thanks V! I will work on what you noted.

Edited! Some things I changed precisely while others I switched around in other ways. Thanks again V.

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"First Dawn Glances" - by C.M.C. - 08-31-2013, 11:58 PM

RE: "First Dawn Glances" - by C.M.C. - 09-01-2013, 09:28 AM

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