mid-reflection
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(08-26-2013, 05:30 AM)btrudo Wrote:  A beginning foretold in a gut reaction,
I liked the gut reaction. I just have little idea what the 'A beginning foretold' is
as instant as the snap of fingers
clicked across a face.
The nuance said it all,
a between the lines reading of a love letter,
a castle sillouetted cloud in the sky.
The vine image seems more central, so I wonder the castle-silhouetted cloud is a distraction.
It grew like a plant living beside a waterfall,
clinging and lush.
I would assume this refers to plant, but given its location, this should refer to waterfall.
There's no heartshaped tin
filled with a ticket stub history,
This is a very good image.
just memory shaped tendrils
that curl through my mind.
There is a lot of development you can get out of these tendrils.
lol, thanks, but I think I'm all tendrilled out. (its a phrase, I just made it up)
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Messages In This Thread
mid-reflection - by ScurryFunger - 08-24-2013, 05:38 AM
RE: mid-reflection - by Apophrades - 08-24-2013, 09:32 AM
RE: mid-reflection - by ScurryFunger - 08-25-2013, 12:58 AM
RE: mid-reflection - by btrudo - 08-26-2013, 05:30 AM
RE: mid-reflection - by ScurryFunger - 09-01-2013, 07:21 AM



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