'Neath Golden Flames

[ScurryFunger]

'Neath golden flames, bronzen shields clash;
Blood flows as rivers, pierced rippling flesh
Armors bathed in gleaming light
Embrace the Winter sky

Journey vast, journey well;
Conquer all with sword and spell

On passage up high, leaving earthly realms behind
Cosmic planes await free from time
To see what is real, remove the human veil
Worlds of light and dark together as one

Journey vast journey well
From unholy depths to glorious Valhall

Luminous...
Withering shards of despair
Enlightened by pulsing beams of life

'Neath golden flames all are unmasked
Thought pours as rivers, from a chalice passed
Behold the truth
Take hold of your mind

you rhyhmed 'well' with 'valhall' shouldnt there be an a on the end of that?

Sorry, but it all seemed a bit 'old fashioned' to me.