08-31-2013, 06:37 PM
Good poem, some of the rhymes could indeed be improved or changed, but most of them read pretty smooth to me. I do like the overall subject. It reads pretty light, but with a critical, questioning undertone.
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Hi I'm new.. Have a read a tell me what you think! - by Xenophon - 08-28-2013, 10:17 PM
RE: Hi I'm new.. Have a read a tell me what you think! - by jdguyb - 08-29-2013, 06:37 AM
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