08-30-2013, 10:58 PM
Ah, an updated version of coffin nails, I like it.
I think I would either go with "smoking" or "them" but not both. If you wanted to extend the metaphor of darts further, I suppose you could say
"whenever I
try to quit
throwing
them."
Just a thought...maybe not a good one
Dale
I think I would either go with "smoking" or "them" but not both. If you wanted to extend the metaphor of darts further, I suppose you could say
"whenever I
try to quit
throwing
them."
Just a thought...maybe not a good one
Dale
How long after picking up the brush, the first masterpiece?
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.
The goal is not to obfuscate that which is clear, but make clear that which isn't.